Board Thread:Fanmade/@comment-34492828-20180127222102

I am relativly new to the Jojo fandom, but I am a heavy fan of the show(s) especily the second one with the pillar men. I though about a way to write a fanmade stand and user, so I began to look around on youtube for idea's and I came up on a video by XForts and his video "The Joestar everyone forgot about" where he talks about that baby that could turn itself and everything it touched invisible. My would idea is that the story would follow Shizuka Joestar and her life after Joseph and her adoptive mother finnaly pass away.

The main villan is the character I have been working on. I hope it wont be to cringy, as it does have something to do with the pillar men, more specificly Santana. He was stil alive, only turned into stone after his fight with Jojo.

The story goes that a girl is sent into the hospital after being assulted by a gang of huligans who wanted to hurt her for no other resone then she was from Mexico.There she got into a coma that she would not wake up from. The speedwagen foundation, now run by speedwagons grandson offers a experimental cure they have been working on, that is pretty much taking genes they been able to take from Santana's body and infuse it with a unkown medicin. The girls parents, wishing to see their daugther wake up from the coma are able to get the doctors to inject her with it. It does wake her up, but it has some weird side effects.

At first she seems fine and are allowed to return home. She seems even improved. Her mind was alote sharper and all her grades sky rocket. Her body seemed to get stronger, and she even grew a little. One day though, she is meet by the same gang she was assulted by before, now comming right to her school to harrash them. She is beaten almost to death, but that is when two things happen. A Arrow pierces her skalp, and she feels how her body grows larger, stronger, and changes in many diffrent ways. She raises up now a powerhouse. (Note here. She is NOT a Pillar (wo)man, at lest yet. Her power is around the same as a vampire, but she does have the abillity to absorb things through her hands, and she is able to expand a horn from her skalp. She is aswell able to walk in sunlight, but her powers are repressed to peak human then instead.) What follows is a grosome scene with five of the ten gang members found dead, the other five seemingly in a coma. The five that are dead are found to have large chunks of their bodies missing, with those pieces not found anywhere. One is even seen shot but the only firearm that is found is the 9mm he himself carries. (Note here: She knows about the stone masks as her parents had one sealed in their house, seeing it as nothing but a trinket, but as Santana's genes mix with her she began to get some of his memories.

Now for the character herself:

Name: Rosa Rivarra (former)Sombra (taken name) (might change it)

look: Rosa towers over most people. She stands two meters tall with relativly brood shoulders, small breasts, normal sized hips, and is built just like other pillar men, like a athletes. She got hip long silver and black stripped hair, and tanned skin.

Abillity: Sombra got many abillities that the pillar men would have with the added abillity of being able to walk in sunlight but if she does so her abillites are drastly reduced.

Stand name: Bittersweet (Or natural high)

namesake: Hammerfalls song, Natural high.

Stats: (I am really bad at this, so any suggestions or tips would be helpful)

Power: ?

Speed: A

Range: A

Precision: ?

Development potential: C

Apperance: Natual high has a humaniod form with its face looking like one of the stone masks but with its mouth would be its split open and the jaw of a crocodile points out. Its hands are twice the size of a normal human with what looks like reserved stone mask burrowed into its four times larger then normal hands. Its fingers got small hooks on them aswell but can be pushed up to the knuckles if fighting for added power. It is covered from head to toe with what looks like stone masks, forming a armor around it.

Abillity: Bittersweet has a aray of powers but the main function is that it functions like a mobile stone mask. Its standar abillity is if able to grab eaither the opponet or its stands, it can forcefully turn that person into a vampire, with the added abillity to fully control that person and therefor the users stand. Once this is done, its impossible to reverse the person to a human, even if abillities that can reverse time are used. This is because that it not only changes the person into a vampire, but aswell changes their past, so they where born as a vampire.

Vivid dream:

Bittersweet enters a stand users mind and forces the person to run away from a vampiric look-a-like within their dream. If the person wakes up, they wont be effected, but as fast they go to sleep again, they are hunted once more. Once the look-a-like captures the victim, they are turned to a vampire much like if Natural high would grasp the person.

Ease my pain:

Unlike the other abillities, this one effects Sombra herself. If she is hit by a attack (and to example sent into a stone wall) Something posetive for her will happen, like a stone falls from the celling, hitting the attacker in the head. Or she is hit by a hamon attack (she is weak to them like all creatures of the night) A rock will somehow be launced up from the ground and hit the person in the stumach with enough force that they lose their breath.

Information gathering:

By seeing the oponents stand just one she get full knowledge on its abillites, and given one minutes her stand adapt to how to counter it. Like if she would meet DIO and his stand, Her stand would be able to adapt to his timestop abillity, and would be able to counter each one of The World's punches even while being timestopped. (I though about this one as for being a JOJO villan she needs to have some OP power, and evelution is what the pillar men where best with, so it fits.)

Any suggestions on stand type and critic more then welcomed. 