Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-28205497-20161220045140/@comment-28205497-20161220222243

Nabukun wrote: BaronBlackFalcon wrote: Nabukun wrote: shit story just looking at the stand So you're judging the story....based on the Stand...and not the story itself? Some critic you are Pretty awesome judging ability, eh?

Here's how I did it: if you can't even write a decent Stand for the protagonist, then there's no way you can make a good Jojo part. Oh and fanfic alternate reality shit After giving it much thought, i think you mean that Starman's abilities doesn't fit with the story's driving force, that being the alternate reality thing. So i've been thinking of changing Starman's abilities and giving the liquid manipulation thing to another character's Stand.