Board Thread:Fanmade/@comment-38478843-20190325135319/@comment-35564842-20190412203837

As for your stand:

It has an alright power. A wee bit similar to Soft & Wet but alright nontheless.

It’s appearance doesn’t work that much though.

1. TG being an artificial humanoid means it’s robotic in appearance and yet you say it has skin.

2. Too many colors. Keep the colors to a minimum (for example make both the “skin” and eyes. Make the pants black as well as the shoes and make the metallic robotic parts like the ornaments explained below silver colored.

3. It’s pointless to have both pointy ears and horns. You could combine them in a sense making them ear-like and horn-like ornaments on its head.

4. Again, if it’s artificial then what’s the point of making it shirtless. Actually, what’s the point in giving it clothes in the first place if you’re just gonna give it shoes and pants. Very VERY few stands have any kind of clothing on them. Though I do believe that the pants and shoes could add something.

It’s user being a Hamon user feels a little bit too fanfiction-y for my tastes and it doesn’t really add anything since Hamon only causes great harm to undead entities. So in a regular stand battle Hamon would be useless.

And the user being shy and timid but becoming more intense when his friends are insulted is a bit cliche too.

That’s all.

Total score: 5/10