Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-26949069-20160701200114/@comment-28452300-20161203180506

RajataelSeth wrote: Thehonestone wrote: RajataelSeth wrote: Thehonestone wrote: screw it.... can you think of a more "jojoish" version of this character? Well, i'd start filling those gaps to give her a true motivation for everything she does. An assassin with an stand could have killed her family, she became homeless but, of course, couldn't do much at the age of 5, but as soon as she became able to kill she became an assassin  to survive and to find her parents assassin from inside the criminal world. That's a questionable way, but surely a noble goal. She could get close to finding the assassin, and then  happens that "experiment" thing, then she loses track of that again.

Also, if you're calling it part 9, i'd assume it's after JoJolion, an universe where the arrows actually doesn't exist yet, but that experiment may have to do with it, making the arrows for  the first time and using for...whatever, that only you know.

She needs friends, or at least people with the same goal. People to interact with her at least a little, and in some points show that she can be somewhat normal sometimes (the startdust crusaders crew even made Jotaro smile a few times)

It's all about making a character that you can understand why is doing that and want  to see that noble goal achieved.

Also, she must be smart at least when talking about combat. Every single JoJo used  stand/hamon in very creative ways...also, in JoJo, if you aren't creative you're likely to die in your first fight. I like it.

however, some of it feels like a generic "killed my family" revenge plot.

my original concept was her going to track down the arrow and the corpse parts, in a universe where the events of both universes took place. the main villain has them, and has created unease and distrust in the stand using community. she finds a lead on the main villain, and goes to track him down and kill him before he does something both ridiculous and destructive... what that plan is exactly is for the end. she ended up getting mutilated and ressurected as our main villain experiments what the arrow does to things. what it does to a corpse?

she likes to do this as a battle strategy: milk them for information, and then kill them as quick as possible. however, she will need to use her power creatively, as she will encounter some powerful and strong stand users.

Yup, kinda generic, but that's because i made it trying to fill your idea, it's not something new from zero. Also, family things is something you see in almost every single part of JoJo.

The corpse parts don't exist in any other universe, just inthe SBR+JoJolion one, that's the whole idea about them.

I hope the enemies are strong anough to balance the fact that she does things quickly, i mean, is realistic to make fights quick, but that doesn't really fit any kind of media. oh, her enimes are strong alright (compared to her). lets say she has to use everything she can, and by the end of a fight, ends up bleeding profusely. and I mean it. not all "edgy badass" sorta bleeding, im talking about negetive painful wounds that she does not ignore and clearly feels pain from them (heavy breathing, shocked expression, etc). however, the reason she does not show much emotion or flair is that shes had to experince so many horrible things in life, her mind ignores the memories subconciously. so to put it simply, shes gone through so much bad, shes become numb to bad.

this thing shes doing is harder than dark souls on ng+