Board Thread:Fanmade/@comment-35564842-20180803204924/@comment-25403136-20180819034025

Cackleviola wrote: I just have one problem with this: ORIGINALITY!!! Be more creative. If you have to describe it as “it’s like star platinum but without the loincloth and blue” that isn’t a good showcase of originality. Sure it has light powers but still one of his 2 attacks is just SYO.

Also it’s not Super Saiyan Blonde, it’s just Super Saiyan.

3/10 for unoriginality First, I changed a lot on the info because of you critique. Second, I tried to make a Jojo that's the complete opposite of Jotaro because Josef is not intimidating, a manga nerd, very smart, and has a stand that is the opposite of SP because it's mostly use for a defense and for getting out of tight situations.