Thread:GoldenOath20/@comment-26664217-20200919161911/@comment-39361941-20201013155655

First of all, there doesn’t have to be a reason to make improvements. It’s done for the soul purpose of making things better. That’s the whole point of editing.

Secondly, Shadow weakness is not an ability, it’s actually part of Chariot Requiems nature of being “the silhouette of the soul”. That’s why I relocated it to the more general category of Soul Manipulation, rather than it being its own category.

Finally, regarding the grammar, I mostly just wrote that to save myself some time typing in the “Describe Your Edit” box. What I actually did was change the overall sentence arrangement and the structure of individual sentences. Adding, removing, and/or relocating words around. The idea is to make the information... how should I put this?... Flow better. Make it easier to follow.