Board Thread:Fanmade/@comment-26912075-20180813220548/@comment-31598739-20181026014823

If you ask me, the idea of the character isn't terrible, just lacking is all. The appearance is a little bland, and adding some interesting details like patterns or pins can help. The personality should probably not be too comedic if it's a villian archetype, but I love the idea of a good liar. Also, why do they have an excavation atmosphere but aren't even an archaeologist? Giving them an occupation like excavator wouldn't be terrible, and would be similar to Dr. Ferdinand. Another thing to note is that it's not really explained HOW they got Desert Rose, so it could be a good idea to involve the Devil's Palm. And don't try to make it humanoid, because humanoid stands are practically gone in Part 7.

Tl:dr, the appearance, personality, bio, and stand all need work. But this has so MUCH potential. Especially if the character was an actual excavator or geologist maybe. Geysers aren't bad. And if you have trouble finding a good stand appearance, try basing it off a Part 7 stand you like.