Thread:Kazanshin/@comment-31598739-20180302183644

Hey! So I've been reading through both sides of the Fanmade Adventure, and I'm starting to worry about your character. You see, he's starting to become a Mary Sue. I think it would be best to write out a personality for your character to follow. It's just worrying me, Kazanshin has acted smart and even started analyzing Joker's poem without even a second, and has identified a bird as a peregrine falcon, even going so far to call it by it's scientific name. But at the same time, your character has been very childish, and has done things that only the comedic characters of the group should be doing, such as name-calling and mischief while breaking the law. Your character has even taken a leader role and started ordering the others around. Paired with Apocalyptic Deity being a really busted stand, and it seems like Kazanshin is going to be a character that's perfect in every way. I feel that it would be better to give him more flaw or choose one side or the other. I'm not forcing, I just wanted you to consider. Thanks for reading! 