Board Thread:Fanmade/@comment-26977364-20170728084918/@comment-30170451-20170814015451

Standing Proud wrote: This one is as long as is interesting, I though of only reading a few lines but then ended up reading it all.

The stats are weird. Range mostly. If is 2 meters then is E, but if the abilites are infinite then it should A or, well, Infinite. I think Putting as E and then noting the abilites don't have a limited range might be better. But that is just imo.

I really liked the appearance. The mask that changes to show expression because of lack of a face is awesome, nice touch.

The abilities are interesting as well, although they don't seem to have much of a connection or theme, but that is just my preference. Making contracts is cool. Seeing other people senses is powerful but I think being permanent is a bit exaggerated. The last one is cool, just because it is.

TL;DR I liked, somethings are not my thing, but overall good job.