Board Thread:Fanmade/@comment-26977364-20170728084918/@comment-33051822-20170909220124

Whalemouth wrote: Stand Name: Down Under

Namesake: Land Down Under, a 1981 song by Men at Work

Stand User: Underlander

Stand User Namesake: Same as the stand

Type: Long Distance, Integrated

Appearance: Down Under is a violet humanoid stand, geometric in design, consisting of different edged surfaces with little detail. Its neck and upper back constantly appear hunched forward, and its face has a large, chinless underbite with a small fin on it. A larger fin appears on its back. It has 4 yellow, triangular eyes.

Destructive Power: A

Speed: B

Range: C

Durability: A

Precision: C

Developmental Potential: D

Abilities:

Vortex Creation: Down Under's ability activates whenever the user of Down Under spits on a solid or liquid surface of at least 5 meters in width and height. In case of solid surfaces, the materials surrounding the spit will crumble into small pieces, equal in size to a grain of sand. Once spat on, the surface will start rapidly swirling downward. Anything caught in the vortex will start spinning towards the center of it. Once the vortex has dragged down a physical object towards its center, the surface will return to normal, causing it to be either buried and likely crushed or submerged, depending on the physical state of the vortex.

I love the concept of this stand Whalemouth but it needs to be a bit more specific. I think it needs to be specific on what qualifies as a physical object to be sucked into the vortex, thus stopping it. Like does it have to be something of a certain weight or density? And I think it needs to be more specific on the AOE of the vortex, unless the whole world somehow turns into a vortex until a physical object gets sucked into its center...