Board Thread:Fanmade/@comment-32974074-20180404190251/@comment-32974074-20180610085612

To be honest I think the stand is really cool but there is already an ice-type stand and I don't know if that would be too repetitive. The mind slow ability seems very useful if you keep that as the single ability of Flairy. If you already made an ability for Flairy being posthumous then I think that you want Shou to be dead some time in the roleplay, right? You can keep that Flairy Second ability too.

Ok now that I am finished critizicing/nerfing your stand let's go ocer to your character. The bio is completely possible nothing against it. The vehicle as well as personality and appearance. But where does he actually belong? Earth being destroyed by the meteors making nations non existant. Is he in a faction, either the Children of the Sun or the Crimson Dynasty? Or even the royal family of King Doom Flake (which will be intrduced later in the roleplay)? Being just a regular wastelander makes it a bit hard to be included in the roleplay.