Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-26949069-20160701200114/@comment-30620010-20161203001249

Thehonestone wrote: RajataelSeth wrote: Thehonestone wrote: RajataelSeth wrote: Thehonestone wrote: RajataelSeth wrote: She can be strong and all, but she can't be really ugly, she has to be able to be fabulous. (the clothes don't have to make sense, that makes it more jojoish too).

But that's just visual, the real thing is, all JoJos are kind and loyal. Even Jotaro and Jolyne were actually good. She has to be someone you'd want as a friend and could rely on. That's something Araki made quite clear. I feel that gets rid of her uniqeness.

she is someone you like, but dont want to enconter in real life.

and shes not like, in shape, shes more like 70s arnold in his bodybulider years.

shes deformed, like I said, but not in the "face is shaped wrong" sort.... lets say part of her head is missing entirely and replace with some other stuff.

however, heres something you would like to know: she has two kinda "ticks" in a way, being that she has a tendency to twitch her neck to scrath itches, and her jaw has a tendency to open and close (as if she was chewing food, not that she can do it right)at  random intervals. the way she eats food is like a cow: she moves her jaw in a circlular motion. she does not take a shower naked (cuase it would be more "fan-disservice) but sits in a river fully clothed, and then gets out. she has an odd life ruotine that would make kira clap.

however, her difining trait is that she avoids anything sexual... most of the time.

if she met jonathan (just skip to 11):  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sa5rW_AJw-U I know it has to be unique, but it's possible to be unique and still keep the most relevant JoJo traits, each JoJo is actually pretty unique and still keep those characteristics. I don't get why making a JoJo part without following that. She could be a good character in another manga, or even a good villain in JoJo, but a protagonist? I just don't feel her like one.

Also, trying to be so non-cliche non-fanservice character makes her feel kinda forced. what makes her "jojo" esqe.

her tendency for outrageously ironic ways of defeating her foes

her habit of bodybuilder poses in victory.

the fact she will use anything in her enviroment as a weapon/disguise. like putting a trashcan over her head as a disguise. or using a... box of crackers as a weapon to strangle a dude

Well, you're adding more details. It's good, but i still have somethign with her personality...well, i'm not Araki to say how you should make your JoJo.

But, what's her age? and...you said she was homeless...why? i mean, what's her relation with the whole Joestar bloodline.

thb, from someone who made two threads about making a new JoJo part, i expected something more...complete. for the early portion of her life (5 to 15) she was homeless, but possessed a distict talent for murder(shes about 35, and looks it), she was forced to become an assasin if she wanted to get off the street. eventully, she was one of the professinals. everything was going considerabl well for her, until she got that faithful job. she did what she does as usual, but was shot by the arrow through the middle of her chest, and to finish their "experiment" on what the arrow does to a corpse, one of them used their stand to take her jaw clean off. she fell into an alleyway and remained as a corpse for 3 days on end. she was starting to rot, until a lightning bolt hit her body, causing her stand to activate post mortem, due to its ability, and the sudden boost in spirtual energy caused her to revive, with the arrow still embeded in her, she felt her jaw, only to find it mostly healed... sort of. its like the arrow took metal and molded it into a crude artificial jaw of sorts. the same went for her chest, a large metal plate was covering up the hole. she then realized she was naked, and then grabbed some raggy clothing, and reaized that there was a roll of gauze beside where she landed with a note "concentrate". she did so, and an arm reached out of her and grabbed the gauze, bought it to her, and she covered up most of her body with it. she needed a lead if she was going to kill this guy, as she made her way into the snow stained streets, the cold biting at her feet. she wondered what she would call this thing that came out of her... she dicided on "thunderstruck"

origin story is yes? sorry if my spelling SUCC's What's the timeline? i believe that being a Joestar is enough to have an stand now, not needing the arrow. Also, homeless with 5years? what happened to her family, i don't believe a Joestar would really abandon a daughter, and wouldn't be defeated easily too.