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tyty, any feedback or things which aren't cool/wouldn't be possible?

So for HfL, the stands concept is unique and cool, and is pretty fleshed out with what the stand can do, it's just not seemingly useful. Adrenaline being increased by the stand is neat but the stand itself doesn't seem to be particularly useful to the user for anything. The ability to increase chemicals in the brain is powerful, but with the way you worded it seems like they can only affect their own chemicals, which is still cool but it's not practical for much, so while it is creative and there are a lot of chemicals one can control with varying affects, they aren't really something that can be used much. What makes stands interesting to me is more than the initial concept but also the usability of the stand and the creative/many ways they can be used despite how simple some of them may be (prime example: S&W) to be usable for just about every situation. So overall, because the stand does not seem to be particularly useful, despite it's interesting premise and concept it gets a "ok" from me.

HfH is far better. The concept is unique enough with it making things either perfect or horrible, and it's far more useful than manipulating chemicals in your brain and making yourself suicidal. I will say though that the concept of HfL is more creative, but ig it's a double edged sword with HfH since HfH can be utilized in many more creative and useful ways.

Tbf, I sort of rambled on with HfL but you get the point...

For Hungry for Heaven, it would be cool if the user's IQ also increased.

"PK oof·1m

So for HfL, the stands concept is unique and cool, and is pretty fleshed out with what the stand can do, it's just not seemingly useful. Adrenaline being increased by the stand is neat but the stand itself doesn't seem to be particularly useful to the user for anything. The ability to increase chemicals in the brain is powerful, but with the way you worded it seems like they can only affect their own chemicals, which is still cool but it's not practical for much, so while it is creative and there are a lot of chemicals one can control with varying affects, they aren't really something that can be used much. What makes stands interesting to me is more than the initial concept but also the usability of the stand and the creative/many ways they can be used despite how simple some of them may be (prime example: S&W) to be usable for just about every situation. So overall, because the stand does not seem to be particularly useful, despite it's interesting premise and concept it gets a "ok" from me.

HfH is far better. The concept is unique enough with it making things either perfect or horrible, and it's far more useful than manipulating chemicals in your brain and making yourself suicidal. I will say though that the concept of HfL is more creative, but ig it's a double edged sword with HfH since HfH can be utilized in many more creative and useful ways.

Tbf, I sort of rambled on with HfL but you get the point..."

Reasonable, but, HfL can be used on others. I'll make sure to point that out.

HfL is cool!

HfH sounds nice, thats actually a very smart idea.

Hmmm let's see....

HfL:

• Nice concept, however as a Queen Ivankov stan, I can't give too many points for originality...

• If it can increase/decrease levels, is this draining on a target's/the users body, or does extra biochemicals just come at no cost? (Aka, serotonin for example; is it produced in the body at the cost of energy as normal, or does it just appear out of nowhere)

• Would say... the weakness doesn't seem like much of a weakness. The suicidal thoughts can be removed with serotonin or similar products, bloodthirst/murderous intentions can be quelled by removing certain chemicals, and psychopathy.... well, not too sure about that one, but anyways... point being, these weaknesses are something I could look at and be like "meh, I can work with this". A small suggestion eould be perhaps.... looking into addictions, and how some drugs affect serotonin release and the like.

(I will review the 2nd one in a sec, and give my final rating on both in my next comment..... can't read the post and comment at the same time in mobile....)

HfH:

'Humans can damage it' - regular people? Stand users? Boe Jiden?

'50+ meters' - does this imply the target must be at least 50m away to be affected?

'Can be used on one thing at a time' - key word.... is missing. Do you mean ONLY one at a time?

The wording's killing me on this one, apologies 😅

So, "horrible flu symptoms"....

Does that mean..

A) Perfect flu strain

B) Perfect imitation of symptoms

C) Imperfect immune system

But then bc of the wording, "horrible", it could mean either the flu is horrible at being the flu... or the flu is making your existence horrible. So,

D) Imperfect flu

E) Perfect immune system

There's also the deal of things like "perfect body shape".... is it the perfect athlete? Perfect s*x appeal as "agreed on" by the mass majority of society? Perfectly evolved human? Something other? Perfections and imperfections on say... a rock or building would be easy to understand, but when it comes to "perfections" that are not so easily defined... kinda see the point? So then, is it a trick of the mind where the target will become perfect in how they themselves think perfect is supposed to be... is it the user's idea of perfect.... or something....

Interesting concept, but not without some faults/further explanation needed.

Soooooo,

HfL: 5/10

HfH: 4/10

Both combined, with the complimenting stand names; 5/10

The abilities are nice in my opinion but basic, though basic necessarily really mean Bad. I really like the stand complimenting each other schtick like Talking Head and Clash with the whole exaggerated couples pet naming shit. One of its own are okay but they go pretty well paired

I like the first one alot. Cool stand ability, Ima make a post on a new stand for you to review.