Well I don't have any exect reason.
But for hamon lets just say that we all know Joseph could chanel hamon throught stand and nobody ever said that it's imposible to chanel it throught humanoid stand also hamon can damage ppl at least acording to this wiki Kars could damage Joseph with hamon.
Well ok thx for information. But I just wanted to say: What if Hermit Purple like stands are Joestar's bloodline stands? Because you know Holly's stand looked like vines too and Jotaro didn't have it because his mother was English/Italian and father was Japanese. And Holly had stand that was different from Hermit Purple because her father was English and her mother was Italian. But it's just a theory.
I darg my hand holding Desert Eagle out of my pocket.
"I just want to make this town a perfect place for my family and friends to live. A place where nobody will try to kill them, destroy the world or do some other shit. So please... JUST DIE! Feeling Bullet!"
He jumps out of the way and summons his stand. A tall, dark and menacing figure with an aura so horrifying that Shiroshi can’t help but move backward in fear. A molten lava-like substance drips from its mouth
(It’s Grit those teeth and it’s from Gurren Lagann)
(Also the only reason Kars damaged Joseph so badly was because he was an ultimate lifeform and therefore had lifeforce (Harmon) that was equal to the sun itself so he burnt that part of Joseph’s body with the temperature of the sun)
(Yes I know but you don’t need to point out that your arm is tearing and is hanging on by some nerves. Just say that about the stands arm before you say the users arm is damaged or it seems like the user was damaged first)
"Next time look what you eat. Haven't you seen that my stand's arm whirst shined with gleen light?" Green shining road pierces your Painkillers neck. "I placed sharp uranium stick there and now you literaly have radioactive road in your neck."
Painkiller takes the fall with its arm and throws TGR away, (an A in range for a stand like this seems too excessive even for a Requiem so i’m gonna nerf it for this response) eventually it goes far enough that you get dragged along with it
At which point Painkiller promptly headbutts your head in
Shiroshi collapses to the ground because of very severe brain trauma
(Result doesn’t change dependent of range, if he didn’t get dragged then PK could just go up to Shiroshi)
(Note: Your defeat was inevitable. You confronted Goode in an open area without a sound strategy. I get you can’t make strategies here but that doesn’t change anything. If this was JoJo’s then you would have still won since without a strategy Painkiller is almost impossible to defeat. I NERFED it for this fight just to give you a fighting chance. And if you’re thinking “Hey, this is pretty OP” then remember that this is one of the first stands I ever conceived. You just can’t best a stand with A’s in both Strength, Durability and Speed based on ability alone)
Heya so here is the stand I come up with, I will not say anything about the user because I gonna write about him later in different post.
For now his name is Yagura Karatachi
Stand Name: Devils in The Mist
Stand Appearance: the stand itself looks like Weather Report and White Album combined. The stand is entirely white, it has the head of the white album, it’s also has the spike things in its had behind like weather report and the body of weather Report just with the blades on legs.
Stand Separation - DTM creates a really big mist around him and area(can make Mist around the world but needs lots of time), and what it does is it separates your stand and the stand itself will attack you and instead of calling your stand back you will get the stand Devils in The Mist who will copy stats but not moves of your original stand.
Stand Swapping: what it does is nearly same as the stand separation but instead if user fights face to face with the enemy and if the user touched the person who is the enemy, then the stand itself DTM will swap with the current stand, opponent controls. By the way DTM will copy the stats but not the moves of the original stand and then it will swap.
The stand itself is long ranged stand and when someone damages it the user will take no damage.
Appearance (Stand): As You Like It is artificial humanoid stand that looks like little humanoid made of black springs and various threads. As You Like It is always holding a pin in it’s right hand. It is 10 centimeters tall.
Appearance (User): Rio has short brown hair and dark green eyes. He is 1.7 meters tall. He wears dark blue jeans, white T-shirt and grey bandana with black stars that his father used to wear when he was younger.
Personality (Stand): As You Like It doesn’t have any personality.
Personality (User): He loves comics, manga, anime and video games and that’s why he works at comics shop. Sometimes he uses his stand for his personal purposes and sometimes acts egoistical. His favorite holiday is Halloween.
Mutation virus: If As You Like It pierces anyone with it’s pin one who was pierced will be infected with virus that can change the body of infected but can’t kill him/her or seriously harm only change his/her appearance (Hair color, eye color, skin color, size of body parts, height, weight, gender, etc.). . For example Rio once changed his gender with his stand just for fun.
Hey does anyone want to do a stand battle with me? I created a new stand but I still dont know how the stand user acts or thinks and I am having trouble coming up with the user so I thought i might be able to test it one here if anyone wants to.
Also if you do want to do a stand battle before you tell me the stands ability and how it does things and information like that PLEASE DO NOT.
In my opinion one of the best things about stand battles is that you dont know what there going to do so you have to figure out there ability and what they are capable of doing with that ability so there is a layer of mystery in stand battles.
But one thing I will tell is what my stand looks like because in a stand battle when the stand is revealed I can see that it LOOKS LIKE IT COULD BE a close fighting stand or a item stand or a colony stand but the fact that it looks like something but is something else could be a advantage so just tell me what it looks like it would be
ok great I would tell you my stand users name and my stands name but I just came up with this charcter as a main villian for a story im creating in my head that i might add as a forum of as soon as i get it figured out more. But what im trying to say is the way the charcter acts and even the charcter himself that i use in this fight might get completely changed later and i havent even came up with everything for him yet so im sorry I will make a name for him and the stand eventually im looking at songs and albums right now
Alright. But the character is in a alternate universe of the metal and sand universe to where it's a lot alike it but the main difference is the way it became this way and the fact that the whole word is covered by ocean so the only places to walk are the boats.
So the character im using is second in command of this massive small country sized Boat that holdes millions of people and is known as a symbol of peace but this character uses his position and has a secret group that he is the leader of thar are trying to get rid of the leader of the massive boat (which the country boat and the characters that i have named are supposed to have a name but i havent come up with any yet if you can think of a good name tell me please) So they can use the boat take over everything else because they are running out of food and they have the power to take over but the leader uses the country to help others and make not just them but the world better. The problem is that they are loosing food and resources from it and there are to many people on the massive boat so the character im using want to use the boat to take from other and have just them live good and everyone else to die.
Sorry for that big mess im not good at explaining things
So right now whatever character you are is trying to kill me because you know what im trying to do and you watch my character that for now im gonna call Mal coming back to the the country on a small boat and people pull him up onto it useing chains and right before he walks out the boat he takes the two grenades out of the boat and throws them both but they dissapear and then the same thing happens to the six bullets he shoots the dont go anywhere they just vanish he then throws two small blades to the sky and they vanish. he then begins to walk in the direction to one of the towns.
Now is your turn to do whatever your going to do sorry this was so long and such a big mess.
(Just a quick explanation of the character. She’s a rebellious fun-loving teen with some emotional quirks that along with her friends use their stands to become superheroes. Her superhero name and only given name is Whatsername.)
(Sorry I keep going to places i was at my grandparents for a while)
(Wait are you saying my character has no memory of the fight? Because my stands ability which he would definitly use after waking up confused like that would help him to know whats happening and what did happen and maybe some more but i cant say how it works yet)
This is Mal's thoughts(Hmm? It seems we went back in time a couple of seconds. Before she reversed time the future looked different than what it does now. Could it be that her ability not only went back in time but changed the timeline we were on? How interesting.)
"You there! do you remember when i tried to kill you earlier?"
(why is it that you contiune to choose what my character does i would not have thrown another blade at you then i still had a tight hold on your stand i would have had no reason to throw a dagger and activate your stands ability.I have let you do it earlier because it made since for you to but please do no choose actions that my character is going to do especially if it involves my character loosing his advantage that he had like that. I had already figured not to attack you directly because then i would be sent back in time because of the heart but this time you forced my character to loose his advantage and do something that in that situation he would not have done. He had a good grip on your stands arm which he would have used that to his advantage at the time and thrown your stand behind him sending it sliding at the same time sending you sliding towards me.)
edit: Thank you Cackle
another edit: Since your character just talked on your turn you should get another turn to do an action all i ask is that you dont make my character do an action
So are you going to do your turn or should i do something because i dont know if you are busy or you just think that its my turn and you are waiting for me to do something whatever it is please tell me.
"It seems i have sliced your arm open. what are you going to do about it? I still have a tight grip on your arm do you have a plan? I could just chop of your stands head couldnt I? again I ask what are you going to do about it?"
(it still exists it was not damaged i dont know if you remember but at the start before even the battle i had my charcter shoot bullets and they vanished as well but dont worry all those things still exist and you will see them. nothing was damaged though)
(I guess since i understand most of your ability ill tell you part of mine. Alright so Renegade has two different types of range one range is the normal how far he can go away from user range and the other range is how for into the future and past he can interact with. Ok so basically everything that happens in time within a hour from him which means a hour in the past and a hour into future he can just look at because his stand is connected to itself from the future and past within that range. So the user can see everything that happens around him by seeing what his stand see's through that time range. And here is how he really uses that ability. He is able to send object and even other stands non passive abilites in time. Here is an example of that. magicians red shoots a fire ball at Mal so he has has to have Renegades hands touch the fire ball and it vanishes into the time he wants it to go to so he can use that fire ball to help himself in the future. so he sent the heart that you threw into the future to block an attack that you did in the future and the hearts ability was used by me but now you have your heart back. So yea thats his ability.)
"It is almost the time that you die, are you ready?"
My stand lets go of your stands arm and in a blink of an eye grabs two blades and starts to barrage your stand with slices all over its body each going deep inside where the bone should be. Renegade then slams both of your shoulders with a chop completly dislocating both your arms and shattering your collar bone and right as your stand begins to fall to the floor six bullets appear shooting your stand in the back finally letting it fall to the ground.
Mal begins to slowly walk in the direction of the town
My stand lets go of your stands arm
Then what about this?
yes he does let go of your arm but its not like he sits there and waits 10 seconds to let you run he does those attacks almost instantly he is a very fast stand he immeaditly attacks after he lets go in less then a second
It just has requires a lot of specifics for you to actually be able to start a battle. Now, I'm not saying that's a bad thing, but I would rather not spend the energy if I'm not that passionate about Fan-Made Stand Battles.
K, guess I'm the one to the first turn. Here goes nothing:
A gray-haired old man humbly walks down the empty hallway of the hotel, looking back and forth between files and room numbers. It's Ritcher, the former police officer who lost his wife and is now searching for her murderer. His research online and shared information with shady people has let him to this hotel. He reaches a certain door, looks at the number, then back at his files and finally stands still for a full minute.
(Let's not control our character's moves for the sake of our own sanity, alright? That's one of the rules on the server I agree with. Also, if you're wondering why I've been abscent...laziness hit me harder than puberty yesterday.)
Ritcher furows his brows. Looking confused, he attempts to open the door again anyways, one hand instinctively buried in his pocket.
(So vaccines are weaker versions of the bacteria they cure so that makes me think. Stands were an illness brought along with a meteorite so if you were to get vaccinated for stands would you get a really weak stand? Would you get a stand at all or would you just be immune to getting one? What about seeing other stands, can you do that? So then you’d be able to see them but you won’t be able to use one)
(Also really dude, this thing is too wide for even the sluttest of megahoes)
(Also can’t deflect them since they’re sorta intangible)
(That would actually be really cool. Think about it, there are allies like Hayato that help despite not having stands so let’s say that someone actually developed a stand vaccine that doesn’t grant a stand but lets you see them and injected it into one of the good guys. Though they’d only be slightly more useful than if they couldn’t see stands)
(It’s thicker than a human skull so I’m pretty sure only hentai sites would be able to offer me that)
(No. It makes things move in a pre-set direction. Like left or right. Basically if it implants itself in you it will make you move a certain direction without you having to move. You could try to fight it but it’s like playing a game with a broken controller)
Ritcher immediately tries to deflect the green dildo.
His eyes widen when he sees it phasing right through his Stand and his hand and burrowing itself in his chest(I guess?). For a moment nothing happens. However, when he tries to move backwards, he suddenly begins falling forwards, further into the room.
'What is this?!'
He attempts at regaining his footing, but once again, as if his body has a will of its own, he begins crawling on the floor like a madman.
(I think it's power is a bit over the top, though. Or rather, it's weakness makes no sense. Shouldn't it always have objects to use? Are there objects in the universe that aren't made of 'chemical proporties'? Or I'm just a biased idiot who should stfu nd leave the critique part to Cackleviola?)
Appearance: I like the whole thing about the stand and user having the same outfit just different colors but I feel like more variety is needed. For example you could have his shirt be open with some blue shirt underneath or some holes in the suit with yellow under them, just anything except all black and all white. The face having no features except for a mouth seems odd to me. Why not just have the face be completely blank or give it stand eyes too(unless it’s a reference then ignore this). I like the detail of it always grinning though. I feel like it looking a normal human/mannequin thing is a bit boring. The idea I got in my head was a humanoid figure with small, muscular legs and a large torso with short muscular arms that have ginormous hands it uses to hold the items during the “birthing” process.
Personality: Something I see that feels wrong here. I don’t think the users personality and stand match. I don’t think a loner who acts all edgy like you made him when you were 14 would have a constantly grinning stand with a fucking fedora. The fedora and suit and the grinning give me the idea of someone confident, extravagant, someone that likes to show off (which could also work with the mannequin face since they’re made to show off fashion). Since the users ability is described as a “child” and the objects that make it up as “parents” maybe you could do something similar to Caesar where he has a strong love and respect for his family/parents. Araki usually makes a stand and then builds the user based on what kind of person would have that stand. Don’t come up with them separately, always base one off the other.
Power: I like it. In my head I’m imagining it holding two items and then in a flash the fusion appears in front of him. I think it’s interesting how it fuses the effects of the item so a pillow would mix with steel and become as hard as steel but as soft as a pillow. No complaints there. I like the weakness of it needing two items to make an object.
Also what’s the point of writing down the user skills if he has none?
Richter randomely starts sliding across the floor when he tries to get up, but he is less shocked about it than a moment ago, having already figured out the boy must've been a Stand User and what was happening to him was the effect of his ability.
'I have no idea what his ability actually does, but there is no doubt about it...He's a Stand User, that boy!'
Richter lets himself slide until he figures out a while to counter the effects, at least for a brief moment. His Stand punches a hole in the ground deep enough for Richter to put his arm in it and hold himself firmly in place.
Richter quickly gets up to his feet and takes a few steps back to put some distance. He frowns when he sees dirt on his coat and brushes it with one hand.
"Damn it lad…This was my favorite coat." Richter mutters to himself, annoyed. He then looks around the room and at Kay before narrowing his eyes a little. "So that bastard wasn't staying here after all…Ficken, I was misled again…Ah well."
He shrugs and starts making his way to the door, ignoring Kay.
(Ok, I don't want to judge, but why DO you write in first and second person?)
Richter tries run towards the door in a hurry but a seemingly invicible force causes him to trip and roll in the opposite direction. He stops until he hits the wall and then begins to slide along it's surface.
(After that he basically does the same thing as in the previous scene, before I redid it.)
Richter curses and glares at Kay.
'That green(dildo) thing was no ordinary projectile. I couldn't deflect it and when it hit me, I felt no pain. But then my body suddenly started moving in random directions, as if my nervous system was out of order. Could this boy be...A Stand User?!'
"Listen lad, if you get anymore agressive the consquences might not be so pretty!" Richter warns Kay, his tone getting a slight cold edge(Don't mistake it for malice, though).
-Oh? You bark pretty good but do you think a dog can bite through metal?
Robotic drones come out and grab Richter's arms and legs, holding him in place long enough for Richter to send two cylinders into him. The downward force from these cubes make the floor break and you fall to a lower level of the building. I jump after you with some drones.
(Virtual Insanity doesn’t have a physical form and is more like Stone Free and just gives him superpowers, so the drones are his solution to this)
(Wait, explain the effect of the drones further. Also, what's Kay's moral compass?)
Richter coughs as he hits the floor below and starts sliding once again under Virtual Reality's effect. His Stand appears from behind him. It grabs several broken parts of the floor above and throws them at Kay as he lands.
(They act as normal drones but they have robot arms. They have radar, cameras, wi-fi. His moral compass is: He won’t attack children or scientific people. But he doesn’t like people who don’t appreciate technology in his eyes)
The drones catch the pieces and put them together into a makeshift weapon that he sends flying with a cylinder
(He cares more about machines than people and worships science as the only true path in life. He considers everyone who doesn’t share his affection an ungrateful peasant to be crushed under the weight of the metal overlords. Except for kids who have the excuse of youth and therefore not knowing any better)
(Ah...a mecha maniac. I have a friend who's sort of like that. A bit over the top if you aks me, but then again, isn't that what Jojo's all about? Also, just to not make this a complete slaughter I'll add some minor effects to Richter's Stand abilities. Cuz otherwise his Stand is just a weaker Star Platinum.)
'Clever, but you are being too obvious lad.'
Richter's Stand punches the ground, causing him to bounce off slightly to the side. Then, the Stand burrows it fingers deeply into the wall, so Richter can stay firmly in one place.
The green dildo and the mashed particles hit the ground.
Richter scowls at Kay a bit more softly than before, as if humoring him.
"Boy, didn't your mother ever teach not to break public property? If I was still a cop I'd have you arrested for this."
'That and also for assaulting an old man...' Richter mumbles mentally.
-I was gonna kill you before, but now you’ll suffer!
Suddenly, a drone flies out from the ground behind you and you (presumably) destroy it. But during that distraction I got a cylinders in several kitchen utensils given by the drones. I throw them all, coming from different directions. Your shirt feels heavy, I had added a “green dildo” to your coat and it tugs you down to the ground
(Ok you told me Kay was gray, but he seems borderline insane.)
Richter grunts as he hits the ground face first. Blood spills out of his broken nose. He tries to get up, but his body stays pressed against the floor, as if the coat was made out of metallic fibers instead of leather ones. Richter takes one deep breath in order to calm himself and think properly.
'Scheißdreck! This brat actually has it out for me! Is he a drug addict?!'
No. Richter could recognize a drug addict when he saw one. Even with the most subtle of their kind, the signs were there if one looked hard enough through their facade. But Kay was different. And yet so similar to another kind of scumbags. Like the many crime lords he has encountered. Their petty and irrational attitude led by their personal agenda. He hunted them all brutally, bringing ruin to their 'empires'. And while he wouldn't be so ruthless towards the boy, Richter knew there was no place for hesitation here.
The boy wants to kill him and was deadset on it. Richter has to retaliate 'in kind'.
(Real sorry for this overblown bs. I just like to get in-depth into character motivations and such. Oh and it's happening in anime seconds so I'm not forcing Kay to just Stand and do nothing.)
'Okay, so...If my observations are correct, then I think I have a pretty good idea what this boy's Stand can do...It's best if I start acting quick.'
As he FINALLY announces the Stand's name, it appears and makes a vertical cut through Richter's coat.
'Sacrifices must be made, friend...'
Richter discards the ruined coat on the ground and makes a surprisingly athletic leap back. Chop Suey swiftly picks up six brick chunks and throws it in several random directions. One manages to bounce off the ceiling(and presumably hit Kay on the head unless his reaction time is superb).
With a distraction caused, Richter runs up to Kay to get Chop Suey in range(which is four to five meters). Chop Sueys lets out a 'divine hum' and Richter stops.
'Chop Suey's ability is half-activated...'
Above Kay's head an astral orb had manifested. Richter narrowed his eyes, noting the color with caution.
(Yeah I got that. I'm just trying to tell things from Richter's prespective. And he himself is quite the sociopath, too. He's a just extremist, but an extremist nonetheless. I imagine him being softer against kids, though.)
(Yeah? But from all the green dildos and metallic shit being thrown around I kinda got confused. Look, can you just ignore that one. I DON'T want to redo this scene.)
(Cack, no. We promised not to control our character's actions. At best, how they are effected by certain things. The green dildo is still a projectile.)
(Anyways, let's continue.)
Richter ducks just in time and kicks up some dirt to reposition himself closer to Kay's side.
'Now, Chop Suey...' Richter orders his Stand coolly.
The Stand makes another divine hum even louder than before, stretching out his hand towards Kay. A glow surrounds the young man for a fleeting moment, before it disappears.
(Ok, so basically the simple answer is: Your offense is significantly weaker. Any hostile action you take is less efficent in any apsect, ranging from speed, precision and overall power output. Your defense and reaction speed stay the same though. Want me to elaborate further?)
(Basically anything Kay does with ill-intent is far less effective then it should be. Now, that's only because Kay's moral compass is gray. If he was black, Chop Suey would prevent from attacking Richter at all, basically freezing him GER-style. If he was white, then the ability would have no effect on him and the fight would continue without any difference.)
(Kay's defense isn't affected. The automated drones should function as normal ONLY when they are protecting.)
-Oh fuck! I can’t lose to an ungrateful peasant like this! All of mothers co-workers told me how great technology is and that I was gifted! Why! WHY! I can’t let them down, let technology down! If only my mother had payed attention to me maybe this would’ve played out differently! No time to think, I MUST WIN!
He calls for a drone to surprise attack Richter (it takes a few seconds so you have time to either do your own thing and let me use it on my next turn or you’re free to use it in yours)
(You were closer to the cigar than I wrote. It does have to do with his mom but it’s not PTSD it’s because she, a computer scientist had so many duties that she ended up neglecting him for most of his childhood and then died. He was practically raised by computers. She died when he was 13 but he didn’t even realize she was missing until he was 15)
Richter grunted. He cursed, stumbling down on the ground, face first, paralyzed for a split second. While Chop Suey rendered most of Kay's attacks non-fatal, even a bit of dull pain could strike an old man like him down, if it hit the right joint. Richter slammed his fist down in frustration, almost growling as he went to get up fast, despite the head-splitting protest of his hurting back.
Richter supresses a cry of pain as he was being hit from all sides, cuts and holes appearing all over his body, some ignorable, others quite worrysome.
He glared at Kay and swiftly Chop Suey slamms it's fists as hard as it could into the ground, sending off a small explosion of flying debris and dust.
Richter doesn't waste a second. A few rocks fly at seemingly random directions from where Richter was. He growls with determination and charges as fast as he can towards Kay. His body hurt like hell, but Richter's mind didn't register the pain. He was dead-set on coming out of this fight alive, for he had a mission he needed to accomplish before passing away.
"I won't die now, not when my wife remains unavanged! Take this - Chop Suey!"
The Stand rears back and shoots forward to punch Kay with enough strength to knock him out cold.
(Also it probably won’t be the exact same as it used to be. Since Golden Wind ended I started watching One Piece and I’m at episode 387 so far. Basically I’ve been watching a lot of One Piece instead of JoJo)