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    This is here, 'Therefore go and make dis- *Ahem* Therefore, fight.


    (Also a Discord Server someone made: https://discord.gg/s3sb9dv  )

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    • FIRST BATTLE WHO WANTS TO GO?

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    • I want

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    • Then let’s do it

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    • I will use Tokyo Ghetto 2 Years Version here is a link to all its versions: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VwG_06DvhlLpt_ooX5C1LUbVNZnvUbcvEdWjR_fKnTQ/edit

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    • Soooo... What stand will you use?

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    • Why a requiem stand and why Hamon?

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    • Well I don't have any exect reason. But for hamon lets just say that we all know Joseph could chanel hamon throught stand and nobody ever said that it's imposible to chanel it throught humanoid stand also hamon can damage ppl at least acording to this wiki Kars could damage Joseph with hamon.

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    • He got Hermit Purple because he was a Hamon user. Hamon = Hermit Purple.

      Jonathan also got Hermit Purple because he was a Hamon user and that’s why DIO has Hermit Purple in part 3

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    • You can’t have your character use Hamon and not have Hermit Purple as their stand

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    • Or at least a close variant like Jonathan’s Hermit Purple 2

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    • Well ok thx for information. But I just wanted to say: What if Hermit Purple like stands are Joestar's bloodline stands? Because you know Holly's stand looked like vines too and Jotaro didn't have it because his mother was English/Italian and father was Japanese. And Holly had stand that was different from Hermit Purple because her father was English and her mother was Italian. But it's just a theory.

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    • What are you talking about? Jonathan and Joseph also had two parents from different families. Are you implying that they’re the result of incest?

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    • You can’t choose a requiem either. It’s entirely dependent on situation

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    • Well I talk mostly about their nationalities.

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    • I created new stand which is something like Scary Monsters.

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    • Now is mine and Artioms battle so you can wait

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    • That sounded kinda dick-ish I apologize

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    • Well it's ok, but maybe we will just start this fight?

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    • I’ll use one of my first stand users

      Jonathan B Goode with the stand Painkiller

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    • Ok. What abilities does his stand have?

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    • I remember a good comment I heard a few threads back

      Isn’t it more accurate if we don’t know each others abilities? Like an actual stand battle

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    • well ok if you want so. Lets start you can go first.

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    • No you start

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    • Ok.

      Location: Seaside

      Time: Midnight

      Weather: Clear



      I walk along the shore and look like I am trying to find somebody.

      "Hey! Where are you man?! I know you are here! Lets finish this alredy!"

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    • (In a monotone bored tone) “God damn it. Just leave me alone already or I’ll have to kill you”

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    • "Well if you say so you can try... But let me warn you. It's your last chance chance to get out of here and never come back. Do you even know how much mess have you caused here lately?"

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    • “I know.”

      The arm of Painkiller appears and rips off a pole connected to a metal fence. Then the head appears and eats it.

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    • "Heh... Well as I said it was last warning."

      I wisper. "Summon..."

      I darg my hand holding Desert Eagle out of my pocket.

      "I just want to make this town a perfect place for my family and friends to live. A place where nobody will try to kill them, destroy the world or do some other shit. So please... JUST DIE! Feeling Bullet!"

      I shoot 2 bullets with red aura out of my Deagle.

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    • “I didn’t mean to kill anyone.”

      Both bullets hit Goode causing him to feel immense pain. He flinches and can barely stand up but he doesn’t scream and stands up anyway

      (Also he’s NOT evil or a murderer(intentionally))

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    • (I understand)

      "Is that all you got to say? "I didn't mean to kill anyone." then how can you explain that last night 3 men were hospitalised and 1 man were killed because they got drunk and met you."

      I aproach you.

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    • (He didn’t MEAN to kill anyone, he still did it)

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    • (Ok what about this rewtiten variant?)

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    • “I couldn’t control him. He’s too destructive for me to handle.”

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    • "Who the hell are you talking about?!"

      I shoot 2 more bulets but with purple aura.

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    • (What’s purple mean because red is obviously anger/hate which didn’t affect Jonathan because he didn’t feel any hate/anger at that moment)

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    • (Red was pain not anger and purple is fear)

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    • They hit but have no effect on him

      (Then what color is anger?)

      (Also I changed the part where he was hit by the red shots since he feels/felt a lot of pain when they hit him)

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    • (I forgot about Anger so thx that you reminded me. Anger will be black colour.)

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    • (Yeah anger/hate makes sense to be black, actually why can’t pain be black and anger be red?)

      (Also it’s still your turn)

      (ALSO ALSO make sure you read the edit)

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    • (I will mark what my character is thinking about with * at the end. And I don't know why I madde pain red - I just thought it was good idea.)

      "Shit. He doesn't fell aything? I need to check it."*

      Hand of TGR appear from my shoulder and point at you.

      "Yes it's true he ddoesn't feel anything - I can't absorb his feelings. But maybe he don't feel anything only now? I am sure he felt pain from first 2 bullets. If so..."*

      I continue to aproach you.

      "Eat this!"

      I shoot 2 more bullets with red aura.

      (You turn?)

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    • (He feels nothing but grief and pain)

      He jumps out of the way and summons his stand. A tall, dark and menacing figure with an aura so horrifying that Shiroshi can’t help but move backward in fear. A molten lava-like substance drips from its mouth

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    • "..."

      I move backward little bit more.

      "Well here we go..."

      Stand aura appears around me.

      "Tokyo Ghetto Requiem!"

      "Stand that melts things inside itself it will be very interesting"*

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    • Painkiller screams loud and makes a long whip of molten metal come out of its mouth

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    • "SHIT!"

      I jump backward but whip hits my foot.

      TGR  absorbs my pain.

      "Pain Bombs!"

      TGR's arm covers with bubles and it ruses to you.

      (Your turn)

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    • (No the whip was the attack the roar was just a roar)

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    • Painkiller eats more of the fence and upchucks on its arm. The arm is damaged but some bubbles survive and hit it. Painkiller is mostly unaffected apart from a slight twitch on the hit area.

      (I mean it is called Painkiller (this time it’s just a comment for fun and not a note))

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    • "Summon!"

      I rush to you. And TGR's arms disappear. A second later it's arms appear again holding extinguisher.

      "Let's make an experimen. What will happen if you drop extinguisher into melting pot?"

      TGR throws extinguisher at Painkiller.

      "But wait thats too boring. Lets drop not just  extinguisher but  extinguisher with a hole."

      TGR punces extinguisher to make a little crack on it.

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    • Painkiller unhinges it’s jaw to bite down on the extinguisher, crunching it so the material seeps out. Painkiller finishes it’s bite and consumes the rest of the fire extinguisher.

      (Notes: 1. Half of the liquid went into the mouth. 2. It didn’t do it intentionally)

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    • I reach to you and prepare to make a hit.

      "As one man once said "Prepare your teeth!". Hamon Cover!"

      My arm and TGR's arm covers with hamon. I hit you and TGr hir Painkiller.

      (I tried to make a refference to one famous anime here but maybe you won't be able to find it because I based it on translation of this anime into my native laguage.)

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    • (It’s Grit those teeth and it’s from Gurren Lagann)

      (Also the only reason Kars damaged Joseph so badly was because he was an ultimate lifeform and therefore had lifeforce (Harmon) that was equal to the sun itself so he burnt that part of Joseph’s body with the temperature of the sun)

      “Argh!”

      Painkiller spews molten metal at Tokyo Ghetto

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    • (Thx for info about Kars. And yes you are right it's from Gurren Lagan)

      "AAGHT!"

      TGR barrages Painkiller.

      "Stay-Stay-Stay-Stay-Stay-Stay-Stay-Stay-Stay-Stay-Stay-Stay-Stay-Stay-Stay"

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    • “A one handed stand barrage against Painkiller? Do you really think that’ll work”

      (Remember he threw up a buncha molten metal on TGRs arm)

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    • "I think it will make you concentrate on one arm and don't look at another."

      TGR's arm disappered once again. My arm start tear untill it hangs on remaining of skin and some nerves.

      "I don't think that you will survive this!"

      TGR's arm appear it's in the same state as mine but in shines with green light at the whirs and holds activated grenade.

      TGR stops barrage and turns fast enought to fully tear it's arm of and send it flying to Painkiller. My arm falls off.

      (To make it clear TGR has A in Speed stat.)

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    • (It was the stand that was hit not the user)

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    • (You know this thing about stand users share wounds of their stand well thats what just happened.)

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    • (By the way how high is temperature inside Painkiller?)

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    • (Yes I know but you don’t need to point out that your arm is tearing and is hanging on by some nerves. Just say that about the stands arm before you say the users arm is damaged or it seems like the user was damaged first)

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    • (Ok next time I won't tipe separeted damages to user and stand.)

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    • (Your turn?)

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    • He eats the arm

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    • (Sorry I need to go lets finish latter)

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    • (It took me longer than I thought but I am back)

      "Bad. Idea."

      I smile.

      "Next time look what you eat. Haven't you seen that my stand's arm whirst shined with gleen light?" Green shining road pierces your Painkillers neck. "I placed sharp uranium stick there and now you literaly have radioactive road in your neck."

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    • Painkiller starts choking uncontrollably

      “Gh-uhghuah”

      “You fool. I truly don’t have control over him. But neither do I receive damage from it!”

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    • "Then if so do you remember how this battle started?"

      I aim my Desert Eagle at you. TGR rushes to us.

      "Bang!"

      I shoot you in the shoulder.

      "Red Blade..."

      TGR pierces you with red blade.

      (This blade is made of pain and can't literaly damage anyone but you will feel that you were damaged.)

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    • “HUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!”

      Painkiller notices my distress and rushes over to stand rush TGR

      (It acts on impulses to protect the user)

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    • "Nope."

      TGR gets 2 hits, turns and slahses Painkiller with red blade. Then it rushes back to me. I pull my phone out of my pocket and look at the time.

      "Shit! Is it realy soo late?"

      "Only 30 minutes left! Oh shit! Oh shit! Oh shit! She will kill me if I won't show up at the concert."*

      I bite my lip and put my phone back into my pocket.

      "Hamon cover!"

      Hamon covers me and TGR.

      "Maybe we will end this right now?"

      I aim Desert Eagle at you again.

      (Most part of this post doesn't mean anything for battle and just shows Shiroshi's nature.)

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    • Painkiller screams in fury again

      Its horrifying aura grows

      “GHYUKHAYAHKYIEGAH” PK stand barrages Desert Eagle with molten lava covering its hands

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    • "Ouch!"

      My last hand is hardly burned by Painkiller's lava and broken. I throw what left of my Deagle aside and rush at you.

      "It's time to finish this."

      I bite your hand.

      "Rainbow star!"

      TGR absorbs me, itself exept one of it's fingers and your hand that I bited. Then TGR starts randomly firing beams of feelings with it's finger.

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    • (But I stand barraged you)

      (And Painkiller has an A in Destructive power)

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    • Hey Artiom I made a thread called “Stand Tournament” and i’d like you to check it out. Not that many people there so far

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    • (Your turn and I rewrote my post a little bit so now it makes more sencse)

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    • (Please grammar check)

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    • (Thx. Is everything ok now?)

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    • (Wait your stand can absorb stuff?)

      (Also lol you wrote “I everything ok now” when telling me that you fixed the grammar)

      (ALSO ALSO as I said, he has an A in destructive power)

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    • (Yep sorry and as I already said I use 2 years version of my stand that can absorb stuff.)

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    • (AN A IN DESTRUCTIVE POWER)

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    • (I rewrote it - now I can't use any of my arms)

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    • “Aaagh!” (Goode reacting to his hand being absorbed)

      Several beams pass by Painkiller but since it feels nothing but rage none of them work on him

      Painkiller screams again and goes in for the final blow, hitting the fingers that were left

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    • Fingers fall off. Sudenly my you hear my voice.

      "Do you like chemistry?"

      Multiply grenades appear in the air at the place where I was absorbed by TGR.

      "They are just toys but filled with C₇H₅N₃O₆. So. You. Can't. Dodge. Them."

      Grenades fall on the ground and blow up.

      ( C₇H₅N₃O₆ is chemical formula of trinitrotoluene - material that blows up if shaken or hited. It's other name is TNT.)

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    • (Why not just say TNT then?)

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    • (I don't know just wanted to use it's chemical formula for some reason)

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    • Painkiller returns and shields me from most of the explosions

      Johns skin is burnt and he has slight trouble breathing but Painkiller stands firm. With only a few scratches as the result of the TNT.

      “WHAT THE FUCK!” You shout

      Painkiller opens its mouth and it is revealed that he ate some of the CHNO formula. That + the extreme internal temperatures causes a great explosion that hits Shiroshi

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    • "SHIT!"

      I fly back. Then TGR apperas it's holding little black ball on the rope with it's teeth and then thorws this ball on the ground and rushes aside.

      "And it is smoke bomb."

      After I say this ball hits the ground and dense smoke covers the battlefield.

      "Man please let's finish this. My girlfriend will kill me if I won't come in time."

      TGR apperas behind you it's covered with bubles of pain.

      "Feeling bombs!"

      TGR falls on you.

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    • (It shouldn’t just be able to go from next to you to behind Goode in an instant like that)

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    • (I fixed it and once again remember that TGR has A in speed)

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    • Painkiller takes the fall with its arm and throws TGR away, (an A in range for a stand like this seems too excessive even for a Requiem so i’m gonna nerf it for this response) eventually it goes far enough that you get dragged along with it

      At which point Painkiller promptly headbutts your head in

      Shiroshi collapses to the ground because of very severe brain trauma

      Jonathan Wins

      (Result doesn’t change dependent of range, if he didn’t get dragged then PK could just go up to Shiroshi)

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    • (Note: Your defeat was inevitable. You confronted Goode in an open area without a sound strategy. I get you can’t make strategies here but that doesn’t change anything. If this was JoJo’s then you would have still won since without a strategy Painkiller is almost impossible to defeat. I NERFED it for this fight just to give you a fighting chance. And if you’re thinking “Hey, this is pretty OP” then remember that this is one of the first stands I ever conceived. You just can’t best a stand with A’s in both Strength, Durability and Speed based on ability alone)

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    • Its stats are

      • Destructive power: A
      • Speed: A
      • Range: D
      • Durability: A
      • Precision: E
      • Development potential: E

      And the way I nerfed it was by removing the heat that constantly surround the outside of its body too and not just the inside (made less OP by the fact that the user isn’t immune to it)

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    • Hey guys I made really interesting stand, who wants to see or hear about it.

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    • (Ok it was great fight but I still want to do something - I want to use secret  technique created by the one who inspirited your nickname)

      "I lost... Well I didn't have any strategy so it was oblivious that I loose. Well at least this one was an interesting oponent"*

      I get up look at you and run away as fast as I can.

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    • One day I think we can make second part of this battle but not now.

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    • (Good final move but I literally bashed your head in. I don’t even think you can remain conscious after that)

      Good fight tho

      (Also good job on figuring out my username origin)

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    • Sure. Just do it

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    • About your nicname well you just wrote it somewhere in players guide to World of Metal and Sand. And by the way why RP stoped?

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    • Heya so here is the stand I come up with, I will not say anything about the user because I gonna write about him later in different post.

      For now his name is Yagura Karatachi

      Stand Name: Devils in The Mist

      Stand Appearance: the stand itself looks like Weather Report and White Album combined. The stand is entirely white, it has the head of the white album, it’s also has the spike things in its had behind like weather report and the body of weather Report just with the blades on legs.

      Abilities: Stand Separation - DTM creates a really big mist around him and area(can make Mist around the world but needs lots of time), and what it does is it separates your stand and the stand itself will attack you and instead of calling your stand back you will get the stand Devils in The Mist who will copy stats but not moves of your original stand.

      Stand Swapping: what it does is nearly same as the stand separation but instead if user fights face to face with the enemy and if the user touched the person who is the enemy, then the stand itself DTM will swap with the current stand, opponent controls. By the way DTM will copy the stats but not the moves of the original stand and then it will swap.


      The stand itself is long ranged stand and when someone damages it the user will take no damage.

      Stand Stats:

      Power - ?(Originally C)

      Speed - ?(Originally C)

      Range - ?(originally A)

      Durability - ?(originally A)

      Precision - ?(originally C)

      Development Potential - None

      Reference: Devils In The Mist by Overkill

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    • So who wants to verse me

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    • I think Jay has either left or in on hiatus or something

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    • Btw how do you like my stand.

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    • It’s alright

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    • Well if we are talking about our stands I also created new one.    

      Stand: As You Like It

      Namesake: As You Like It by Eve

      Link to the song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nROvY9uiYYk

      User Name: Rio

      User Surname: Kuro

      User Namesake: Kuro - Black

      Appearance (Stand):  As You Like It is artificial humanoid stand that looks like little humanoid made of black springs and various threads. As You Like It is always holding a pin in it’s right hand. It is 10 centimeters tall.

      Appearance (User): Rio has short brown hair and dark green eyes. He is 1.7 meters tall. He wears dark blue jeans, white T-shirt and grey bandana with black stars that his father used to wear when he was younger.

      Personality (Stand): As You Like It doesn’t have any personality.

      Personality (User): He loves comics, manga, anime and video games and that’s why he works at comics shop. Sometimes he uses his stand for his personal purposes and sometimes acts egoistical. His favorite holiday is Halloween.


      Abilities (Stand):

      Mutation virus: If As You Like It pierces anyone with it’s pin one who was pierced will be infected with virus that can change  the body of infected but can’t kill him/her or seriously harm only change his/her appearance (Hair color, eye color, skin color, size of body parts, height, weight, gender, etc.). . For example Rio once changed his gender with his stand just for fun.

      Abilities (User): None

      Stats:

      As You Like It Stats

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    • (Hey, Rin. The link there is outdated. Can you update it to this link? https://discord.gg/s3sb9dv thanks.)

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    • Hey does anyone want to do a stand battle with me? I created a new stand but I still dont know how the stand user acts or thinks and I am having trouble coming up with the user so I thought i might be able to test it one here if anyone wants to.

      Also if you do want to do a stand battle before you tell me the stands ability and how it does things and information like that PLEASE DO NOT.

      In my opinion one of the best things about stand battles is that you dont know what there going to do so you have to figure out there ability and what they are capable of doing with that ability so there is a layer of mystery in stand battles.

      But one thing I will tell is what my stand looks like because in a stand battle when the stand is revealed I can see that it LOOKS LIKE IT COULD BE a close fighting stand or a item stand or a colony stand but the fact that it looks like something but is something else could be a advantage so just tell me what it looks like it would be 

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    • Sure

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    • ok great I would tell you my stand users name and my stands name but I just came up with this charcter as a main villian for a story im creating in my head that i might add as a forum of as soon as i get it figured out more. But what im trying to say is the way the charcter acts and even the charcter himself that i use in this fight might get completely changed later and i havent even came up with everything for him yet so im sorry I will make a name for him and the stand eventually im looking at songs and albums right now

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    • Tell me the ability and I can aid you, I’m a veteran Fan-Made Stand creator

      Edit: Nevermind that would slightly spoil the fun

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    • I think i have a decent idea for the ability but you will have to figure it out during the stand battle 

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    • Well then

      Let’s begin

      You pick location

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    • Alright. But the character is in a alternate universe of the metal and sand universe to where it's a lot alike it but the main difference is the way it became this way and the fact that the whole word is covered by ocean so the only places to walk are the boats.

      So the character im using is second in command of this massive small country sized Boat that holdes millions of people and is known as a symbol of peace but this character uses his position and has a secret group that he is the leader of thar are trying to get rid of the leader of the massive boat (which the country boat and the characters that i have named are supposed to have a name but i havent come up with any yet if you can think of a good name tell me please)  So they can use the boat take over everything else because they are running out of food and they have the power to take over but the leader uses the country to help others and make not just them but the world better. The problem is that they are loosing food and resources from it and there are to many people on the massive boat so the character im using want to use the boat to take from other and have just them live good and everyone else to die.

      S​​orry for that big mess im not good at explaining things

      So right now whatever character you are is trying to kill me because you know what im trying to do and you watch my character that for now im gonna call Mal coming back to the the  country on a small boat and people pull him up onto it useing chains and right before he walks out the boat he takes the two grenades out of the boat and throws them both but they dissapear and then the same thing happens to the six bullets he shoots the dont go anywhere they just vanish he then throws two small blades to the sky and they vanish. he then begins to walk in the direction to one of the towns.

      Now is your turn to do whatever your going to do sorry this was so long and such a big mess.

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    • also i acciedntly made the one sentance dark and huge and i dont know how to fix that so oops

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    • I read it but it contradicts my character and since in both versions I’m the one who initiates combat I shall

      -“Hey you, Mal. I’ve heard some pretty shady rumors about you and your apparent secret squad. So I’m here for some questioning.”

      I approach you from above (there are masts all over)

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    • (Mal grins when he hears the man)

      Hello! How are you? It would be my pleasure to answer anything you need to know.

      (Mal reaches his hand out to give him a handshake)

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    • (Woman, and she’s clinging to a mast, sorry if I didn’t make that clear)

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    • (Just a quick explanation of the character. She’s a rebellious fun-loving teen with some emotional quirks that along with her friends use their stands to become superheroes. Her superhero name and only given name is Whatsername.)

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    • You there?

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    • yea sorry i was at a friends house so i did not have my computer 

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    • I did not know it was a she but i did know you were above me my character is going to contiune to hold his hand up waiting for her to shake his hand

      "So what is it that you needed to know from me?"

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    • -“I’ve heard that you’re planning something big, big like murdering all the leaders and taking over.”

      I jump down and causiosly approach. After a few seconds Mal lets down his hand as he realizes she won’t shake it.

      (Also why is he called Mal? And not something like Mel?)

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    • (look up what the word Mal means)

      Who led you to believe something like that hmmm? How do you feel about that what is your belief on the fact? 

      Mal slowly slides his hand to one of his two guns on his back.

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    • She notices the movement and jumps back. A strange heart shape appears in her hand. It’s green and foul with cracks in it.

      -“I see. So they were true, or not. Either way this proves I have to beat you”

      A stand manifests behind her, readying its guard

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    • (Hey can you explain a bit what the stand looks like since i obviously cant see it myself just so i can get an idea of it)

      No. Mal shakes his head. No. No! NO!

      I am just defending myself i have no intention of hurting you it just seems like your mind is set on beating me and I dont know about you but I am not a big fan of getting falsely accused.

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    • (Hang on I need to know. What’s his alignment? Is he chaotic evil? Lawful evil? Chaotic neutral? This is extremely important)

      (Also please add “” these and/or -these so I understand when he’s talking and when there’s an action)

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    • (my bad i forgot to show if he is taliking or doing an action and he  is a chaotic evil. also it is still your turn to do something so im gonna let that happen)

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    • (Ok cool so I was correct)

      -“Bull. Shit. The heart shows differently. You can’t lie to my 『She’s a Rebel』

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    • "hmmm is that so?" "Then you leave me with no choice"

      Mal slides out a gun and throws a small blade that was tucked in his sleeve in the air and and shooting it with gun in the perfect angle to ricochet down and go for your back.

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    • Whatsername drops the heart behind her making it take all the damage. A retching pain starts in your chest and you bow your head down to vomit. You look up and Whatsername is not there

      Mal: -“What am I doing here? Did I black out?”

      He looks around in confusion and walks back to where he was before the fight

      (Note: He wasn’t teleported. He remained at the same place he was when he was in pain)

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    • (Cackle I edited this to fix the situation now that i understand whats happening a bit better and im going to contiune on after what you showed my character to say) My stand [Renegade] reveals* 

      The action and the words Mal say happen at the same time

      Mal: -"What am I doing here? Did I black out?"

      (Renegade's multiple triangle patterned eyes start to glow blue and grabs some blades from Mals sleeve and throws them all around him)

      Seconds after this action

      (I understand better now thankyou for showing me what has happened)

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    • -“Woah, Jesus! Calm down. I’ve heard some pretty shady rumors about you and your apparent secret squad. But based on that attack I don’t think I’ll need questioning.”

      I jump over on the masts, clinging on to the closest one

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    • (Also he has no memory of the fight, so you can change that)

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    • Uuuuh. Hello?

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    • (Sorry I keep going to places i was at my grandparents for a while)

      (Wait are you saying my character has no memory of the fight? Because my stands ability which he would definitly use after waking up confused like that would help him to know whats happening and what did happen and maybe some more but i cant say how it works yet)

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    • (It’s part of my ability)

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    • ( I know its part of your ability and you succesfully erase my memory of fight but with my ability im able to regain it)

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    • (What the fuck then this shit will be weird. Umm. I don’t know what to do anymore)

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    • (My bad my stands ability is weird and so far just so happens to go agaisnt what yours does)

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    • Mal: -“Her speech, her reaction, her placement. Could it be that she sent me back in time!? But then why wouldn’t she remember?”

      Whatsername: -“Hey! Are you listening? I said I’ve got some (summons her stand (which is pink and red with black accents and a punk theme) and uses it to summon his heart) questions to ask you!

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    • This is Mal's thoughts(Hmm? It seems we went back in time a couple of seconds. Before she reversed time the future looked different than what it does now. Could it be that her ability not only went back in time but changed the timeline we were on? How interesting.)

      "You there! do you remember when i tried to kill you earlier?"

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    • -“You tried to assassinate me? And your heart tells me that you’re a rotten piece of shit. I gotta say that should be enough evidence for me to beat your ass.”

      My stand lunges forth and punches at you

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    • "Is that all ive done? Your not even dead yet and your already complaining!?"

      My stand quickly grabs yours stands arm with its right hand and with the other slices your stands arm with a small blade

      "My advice is to be thankful you are still breathing and wait till your at the bottom of the ocean dead to be upset."

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    • -“I’m not complaining about death. I’m just saying. I know what you are thanks to this”

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    • (why is it that you contiune to choose what my character does i would not have thrown another blade at you then i still had a tight hold on your stand i would have had no reason to throw a dagger and activate your stands ability.I have let you do it earlier because it made since for you to but please do no choose actions that my character is going to do especially if it involves my character loosing his advantage that he had like that. I had already figured not to attack you directly because then i would be sent back in time because of the heart but this time you forced my character to loose his advantage and do something that in that situation he would not have done. He had a good grip on your stands arm which he would have used that to his advantage at the time and thrown your stand behind him sending it sliding at the same time sending you sliding towards me.)

      edit: Thank you Cackle 

      another edit: Since your character just talked on your turn you should get another turn to do an action all i ask is that you dont make my character do an action

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    • So are you going to do your turn or should i do something because i dont know if you are busy or you just think that its my turn and you are waiting for me to do something whatever it is please tell me.

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    • It’s your turn

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    • "It seems i have sliced your arm open. what are you going to do about it? I still have a tight grip on your arm do you have a plan? I could just chop of your stands head couldnt I? again I ask what are you going to do about it?"

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    • I chuck the heart at you

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    • Mals grin widens as he begins to chuckle.

      Renegade's left arm reaches out to the heart and grabs it and it vanishes into thin air it is gone.

      Mal-:"YOU IDIOT!"

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    • (How did it vanish? Also you might have fucked up since all damage dealt by the person it’s linked to will be reflected)

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    • (it still exists it was not damaged i dont know if you remember but at the start before even the battle i had my charcter shoot bullets and they vanished as well but dont worry all those things still exist and you will see them. nothing was damaged though)

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    • (I literally won’t be able to continue the fight if I don’t understand your ability)

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    • (I guess since i understand most of your ability ill tell you part of mine. Alright so Renegade has two different types of range one range is the normal how far he can go away from user range and the other range is how for into the future and past he can interact with. Ok so basically everything that happens in time within a hour from him which means a hour in the past and a hour into future he can just look at because his stand is connected to itself from the future and past within that range. So the user can see everything that happens around him by seeing what his stand see's through that time range. And here is how he really uses that ability. He is able to send object and even other stands non passive abilites in time. Here is an example of that. magicians red shoots a fire ball at Mal so he has has to have Renegades hands touch the fire ball and it vanishes into the time he wants it to go to so he can use that fire ball to help himself in the future. so he sent the heart that you threw into the future to block an attack that you did in the future and the hearts ability was used by me but now you have your heart back. So yea thats his ability.)

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    • (So the heart is in the future?)

      Anyways:

      I spawn another heart

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    • (The heart was sent to help me in the future yes)

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    • Your move

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    • "It is almost the time that you die, are you ready?"

      My stand lets go of your stands arm and in a blink of an eye grabs two blades and starts to barrage your stand with slices all over its body each going deep inside where the bone should be. Renegade then slams  both of your shoulders with a chop completly dislocating both your arms and shattering your collar bone and right as your stand begins to fall to the floor six bullets appear shooting your stand in the back finally letting it fall to the ground.

      Mal begins to slowly walk in the direction of the town

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    • Now you did what I did earlier. I wouldn’t just be there and let myself be stabbed (plus I have a B in durability). Rebel moves out of range

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    • did you forget that renegade had a tight hold on your stands arm?

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    • Cackleviola wrote:
      Now you did what I did earlier. I wouldn’t just be there and let myself be stabbed (plus I have a B in durability). Rebel moves out of range

      how woud you move out of range if your arm was held onto by my stand?

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    • Gomon13 wrote: My stand lets go of your stands arm

      Then what about this?

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    • Cackleviola wrote:

      Gomon13 wrote: My stand lets go of your stands arm

      Then what about this?

      yes he does let go of your arm but its not like he sits there and waits 10 seconds to let you run he does those attacks almost instantly he is a very fast stand he immeaditly attacks after he lets go in less then a second

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    • It’s not like I need ten seconds either

      I just wanna know so I can agree with you:

      Does your stand have a higher stat than B?

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    • Ok so this stand is the main villians stand of the part im making so i tried to make it good 

      Destructive power-A it is almost exactly as physically strong as crazy diamond

      Speed-A it is ment to be VERY fast. this is it's best stat it is faster then star platinum by a decent amount

      Range-D its range is about 2 meters 

      durability-C it's defense is about twice that of a regular human

      Precision-A It is extremely precise with its attacks and its throws. it doesnt ever usally directly just punch something though it uses different types of blades to attack with 

      Potential-A It gets a boost kinda like D4C Love Train close to end of part so its an A

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    • Those are some overpowered stats but anyways I still have a counter

      After you stabbed She’s a Rebel a few times she summoned the heart and it got stabbed

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    • Hello?

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    • It’s been two days

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    • Three, three days

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    • A GODDAMN WEEK!

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    • Hello I got a Fan Made Stand thats in the Part 4 Fan made ones. I want to see that fight

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    • Sure, Gomon is Go-gone so I can do it

      I won’t be looking up your stand since just like with Gomon I want it to be a mystery. Though the stats would definitely help me determine if an action is possible or not

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    • Hello?

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    • So did this die?

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    • Yes, because there's a discord server for that now. 

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    • God fucking damn it

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    • WAIT! DID THE DISCORD SERVER ACTUALLY CATCH ON THAT HARD?

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    • Sadly

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    • The rules there are a bit of...bizzarre(kill me please). 

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    • How so? How did they change?

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    • It just has requires a lot of specifics for you to actually be able to start a battle. Now, I'm not saying that's a bad thing, but I would rather not spend the energy if I'm not that passionate about Fan-Made Stand Battles.

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    • How about we do one without so many specifics here?

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    • I mean since most people go to the server nowdays, why not?

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    • Great. Just need to make a stand. Should take about 10 to 15 minutes or so

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    • There.

      Jay Kay with the stand Virtual Insanity

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    • Oh shit, you thought I was gonna battle, too? Damn, well...I guess I'll give it a shot. But as you've seen, I'm shit at making my own Stands. 

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    • You literally replied to me saying “How about we do one here” With “Why not”

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    • If you want to be specific, then I'll say that I meant it as: 'Sure go ahead and battle with smbd'. But anyways, that doesn't matter.

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    • Yeah. Just name your user and stand and we’ll begin

      (You might have to wait a while)

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    • Well, most of the Stands I've made have some pretty busted abilities that are borderline unfair or just unfit for one-on-one combat. 

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    • Like the Stand Stand. Or All 4 One. Or Chop Suey.

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    • Just make sure to put limitations on it and it’ll be fine

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    • Ritcher with Chop Suey. 

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    • Ok. Let’s begin then.

      Location(suggestion): A Vegas-esque hotel

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    • K, guess I'm the one to the first turn. Here goes nothing:

      A gray-haired old man humbly walks down the empty hallway of the hotel, looking back and forth between files and room numbers. It's Ritcher, the former police officer who lost his wife and is now searching for her murderer. His research online and shared information with shady people has let him to this hotel. He reaches a certain door, looks at the number, then back at his files and finally stands still for a full minute.

      'Well...I think this might actually be it...'

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    • You reach your hand out to grab the doorknob but are startled when you hear him yelling

      -“NO! NO NO NO! Wrong! So, so wrong!”

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    • (Let's not control our character's moves for the sake of our own sanity, alright? That's one of the rules on the server I agree with. Also, if you're wondering why I've been abscent...laziness hit me harder than puberty yesterday.)

      Ritcher furows his brows. Looking confused, he attempts to open the door again anyways, one hand instinctively buried in his pocket.

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    • (Can’t relate. I just kinda skipped puberty)

      -Who goes there?

      The door slams open to reveal a room filled with computers and other nerdy science-y stuff

      Jay analyzes Richter for a moment

      -I see.

      Jay spawns a green, cylindrical grid and shoots it at Richter

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    • (Are you sure you don't have King Crimson Requiem?)

      Ritcher's eyes widen in surprise, but he reacts quickly enough. The green dildo gets deflected by a transparent white hand, sticking out of Ritcher's left shoulder.

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    • (So vaccines are weaker versions of the bacteria they cure so that makes me think. Stands were an illness brought along with a meteorite so if you were to get vaccinated for stands would you get a really weak stand? Would you get a stand at all or would you just be immune to getting one? What about seeing other stands, can you do that? So then you’d be able to see them but you won’t be able to use one)

      (Also really dude, this thing is too wide for even the sluttest of megahoes)

      (Also can’t deflect them since they’re sorta intangible)

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    • (Kinda removes the point of Stands doesn't it? It's basically like being on crack 24/7)

      (You'll be surprised what porn sites can offer you)

      (Ok, what are the overall effects of the dildo?)

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    • (That would actually be really cool. Think about it, there are allies like Hayato that help despite not having stands so let’s say that someone actually developed a stand vaccine that doesn’t grant a stand but lets you see them and injected it into one of the good guys. Though they’d only be slightly more useful than if they couldn’t see stands)

      (It’s thicker than a human skull so I’m pretty sure only hentai sites would be able to offer me that)

      (Look at the music video for Virtual Insanity)

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    • (It moves things backwards?)

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    • (No. It makes things move in a pre-set direction. Like left or right. Basically if it implants itself in you it will make you move a certain direction without you having to move. You could try to fight it but it’s like playing a game with a broken controller)

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    • (O...k? Lemmie redo the scene then.)

      Ritcher immediately tries to deflect the green dildo.

      "?!"

      His eyes widen when he sees it phasing right through his Stand and his hand and burrowing itself in his chest(I guess?). For a moment nothing happens. However, when he tries to move backwards, he suddenly begins falling forwards, further into the room. 

      'What is this?!'

      He attempts at regaining his footing, but once again, as if his body has a will of its own, he begins crawling on the floor like a madman. 

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    • (Wow. You got it perfectly right, except for the falling on your face thing but it’s nothing super important)

      -What was an ungrateful peasant like you doing in front of my door?

      Jay moves forward and steps on Richters head.

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    • Richter grunts and attempts to let out a sarcastic chuckle.

      "My oh my, youngsters these days..."

      Suddenly, a white and black 'spirit' appears behind Jay attempts to strike him. 

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    • He tries to turn around but is only able to turn halfway before he’s pounded straight in the face throwing him into a computer.

      Kay looks behind himself, seeing the shattered screen

      -You... “cough” Just made a horrible mistake

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    • (Oof. It be like that. Maybe a new sutando tsukai should aid him.)

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    • (Wait what?)

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    • Antydeth wrote:
      (Wait what?)

      (Im saying i have a stand idea lol)

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    • (Ok. You feel like sharing it?)

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    • (Oh...uuuh, cool Stand I guess)

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    • (I think it's power is a bit over the top, though. Or rather, it's weakness makes no sense. Shouldn't it always have objects to use? Are there objects in the universe that aren't made of 'chemical proporties'? Or I'm just a biased idiot who should stfu nd leave the critique part to Cackleviola?)

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    • (Critique time:

      Appearance: I like the whole thing about the stand and user having the same outfit just different colors but I feel like more variety is needed. For example you could have his shirt be open with some blue shirt underneath or some holes in the suit with yellow under them, just anything except all black and all white. The face having no features except for a mouth seems odd to me. Why not just have the face be completely blank or give it stand eyes too(unless it’s a reference then ignore this). I like the detail of it always grinning though. I feel like it looking a normal human/mannequin thing is a bit boring. The idea I got in my head was a humanoid figure with small, muscular legs and a large torso with short muscular arms that have ginormous hands it uses to hold the items during the “birthing” process.

      Personality: Something I see that feels wrong here. I don’t think the users personality and stand match. I don’t think a loner who acts all edgy like you made him when you were 14 would have a constantly grinning stand with a fucking fedora. The fedora and suit and the grinning give me the idea of someone confident, extravagant, someone that likes to show off (which could also work with the mannequin face since they’re made to show off fashion). Since the users ability is described as a “child” and the objects that make it up as “parents” maybe you could do something similar to Caesar where he has a strong love and respect for his family/parents. Araki usually makes a stand and then builds the user based on what kind of person would have that stand. Don’t come up with them separately, always base one off the other.

      Power: I like it. In my head I’m imagining it holding two items and then in a flash the fusion appears in front of him. I think it’s interesting how it fuses the effects of the item so a pillow would mix with steel and become as hard as steel but as soft as a pillow. No complaints there. I like the weakness of it needing two items to make an object.

      Also what’s the point of writing down the user skills if he has none?

      Criticism ended)

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    • (Great analysis, Cackleviola. Now shall we go back to the fight?)

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    • (Dude, your turn. And please, call me Cackle)

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    • (And you can call me Anty.)

      Richter randomely starts sliding across the floor when he tries to get up, but he is less shocked about it than a moment ago, having already figured out the boy must've been a Stand User and what was happening to him was the effect of his ability.

      'I have no idea what his ability actually does, but there is no doubt about it...He's a Stand User, that boy!'

      Richter lets himself slide until he figures out a while to counter the effects, at least for a brief moment. His Stand punches a hole in the ground deep enough for Richter to put his arm in it and hold himself firmly in place. 

         

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    • (The Stand was de-activated when you punched me)

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    • (Ok, I'll redo the scene. AGAIN.)

      Richter quickly gets up to his feet and takes a few steps back to put some distance. He frowns when he sees dirt on his coat and brushes it with one hand.

      "Damn it lad…This was my favorite coat." Richter mutters to himself, annoyed. He then looks around the room and at Kay before narrowing his eyes a little. "So that bastard wasn't staying here after all…Ficken, I was misled again…Ah well."

      He shrugs and starts making his way to the door, ignoring Kay.

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    • (Oof)

      The door slams shut

      -Do you think you can just leave after what you just did?

      I create another cylinder and throw it, it misses you but keeps going into a cabinet that starts moving and rams into your back

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    • (Ok, I don't want to judge, but why DO you write in first and second person?)

      "Ficken!"

      Richter tries run towards the door in a hurry but a seemingly invicible force causes him to trip and roll in the opposite direction. He stops until he hits the wall and then begins to slide along it's surface. 

      (After that he basically does the same thing as in the previous scene, before I redid it.)

      Richter curses and glares at Kay. 

      'That green(dildo) thing was no ordinary projectile. I couldn't deflect it and when it hit me, I felt no pain. But then my body suddenly started moving in random directions, as if my nervous system was out of order. Could this boy be...A Stand User?!'

      "Listen lad, if you get anymore agressive the consquences might not be so pretty!" Richter warns Kay, his tone getting a slight cold edge(Don't mistake it for malice, though).

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    • (Btw, how tf did Kay close the door if Richter is closer to it?)

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    • (Cuz I is faster to spell than Kay)

      (Stand cylinder. Works on objects too)

      -Oh? You bark pretty good but do you think a dog can bite through metal?

      Robotic drones come out and grab Richter's arms and legs, holding him in place long enough for Richter to send two cylinders into him. The downward force from these cubes make the floor break and you fall to a lower level of the building. I jump after you with some drones.

      (Virtual Insanity doesn’t have a physical form and is more like Stone Free and just gives him superpowers, so the drones are his solution to this)

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    • (Oh...Ok, I was just about to ask if that's the case. So did Kay shoot at the door while he was opening the door?)

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    • (You only wrote that he starts making his way to the door, not that he reached it)

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    • (Yeaaaah...? Anyways, let's continue. Your turn.)

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    • (No u)

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    • (Wait, explain the effect of the drones further. Also, what's Kay's moral compass?)

      Richter coughs as he hits the floor below and starts sliding once again under Virtual Reality's effect. His Stand appears from behind him. It grabs several broken parts of the floor above and throws them at Kay as he lands. 

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    • (They act as normal drones but they have robot arms. They have radar, cameras, wi-fi. His moral compass is: He won’t attack children or scientific people. But he doesn’t like people who don’t appreciate technology in his eyes)

      The drones catch the pieces and put them together into a makeshift weapon that he sends flying with a cylinder

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    • (So wait...is he good or evil? Cuz he could still be evil but not attack children or scientists.)

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    • (He’s gray)

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    • (Hmm...well that kind of limits me.)

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    • (Big oof)

      (He cares more about machines than people and worships science as the only true path in life. He considers everyone who doesn’t share his affection an ungrateful peasant to be crushed under the weight of the metal overlords. Except for kids who have the excuse of youth and therefore not knowing any better)

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    • (Ah...a mecha maniac. I have a friend who's sort of like that. A bit over the top if you aks me, but then again, isn't that what Jojo's all about? Also, just to not make this a complete slaughter I'll add some minor effects to Richter's Stand abilities. Cuz otherwise his Stand is just a weaker Star Platinum.)

      'Clever, but you are being too obvious lad.'


      Richter's Stand punches the ground, causing him to bounce off slightly to the side. Then, the Stand burrows it fingers deeply into the wall, so Richter can stay firmly in one place.

      The green dildo and the mashed particles hit the ground.

      Richter scowls at Kay a bit more softly than before, as if humoring him.

      "Boy, didn't your mother ever teach not to break public property? If I was still a cop I'd have you arrested for this."

      'That and also for assaulting an old man...' Richter mumbles mentally.   

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      SorryForTheOnePieceIJustNeededADeathGlare








      (Not how he actually looks, just his expression)

      -I was gonna kill you before, but now you’ll suffer!

      Suddenly, a drone flies out from the ground behind you and you (presumably) destroy it. But during that distraction I got a cylinders in several kitchen utensils given by the drones. I throw them all, coming from different directions. Your shirt feels heavy, I had added a “green dildo” to your coat and it tugs you down to the ground

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    • (Ok you told me Kay was gray, but he seems borderline insane.)

      "Ngh!"

      Richter grunts as he hits the ground face first. Blood spills out of his broken nose. He tries to get up, but his body stays pressed against the floor, as if the coat was made out of metallic fibers instead of leather ones. Richter takes one deep breath in order to calm himself and think properly. 

      'Scheißdreck! This brat actually has it out for me! Is he a drug addict?!'

      No. Richter could recognize a drug addict when he saw one. Even with the most subtle of their kind, the signs were there if one looked hard enough through their facade. But Kay was different. And yet so similar to another kind of scumbags. Like the many crime lords he has encountered. Their petty and irrational attitude led by their personal agenda. He hunted them all brutally, bringing ruin to their 'empires'. And while he wouldn't be so ruthless towards the boy, Richter knew there was no place for hesitation here.

      The boy wants to kill him and was deadset on it. Richter has to retaliate 'in kind'. 

      (Real sorry for this overblown bs. I just like to get in-depth into character motivations and such. Oh and it's happening in anime seconds so I'm not forcing Kay to just Stand and do nothing.) 

      'Okay, so...If my observations are correct, then I think I have a pretty good idea what this boy's Stand can do...It's best if I start acting quick.'

      "CHOP SUEY!"

      As he FINALLY announces the Stand's name, it appears and makes a vertical cut through Richter's coat.

      'Sacrifices must be made, friend...'

      Richter discards the ruined coat on the ground and makes a surprisingly athletic leap back. Chop Suey swiftly picks up six brick chunks and throws it in several random directions. One manages to bounce off the ceiling(and presumably hit Kay on the head unless his reaction time is superb). 

      With a distraction caused, Richter runs up to Kay to get Chop Suey in range(which is four to five meters). Chop Sueys lets out a 'divine hum' and Richter stops. 

      'Chop Suey's ability is half-activated...'

      Above Kay's head an astral orb had manifested. Richter narrowed his eyes, noting the color with caution.

      'Gray?'



        

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    • (Richter uttered his trigger word)

      (It’s fine, I like more in depth characters)

      (No, it’s not but his drones are automatic)

      Jay can be seen giving several clones solid Cylinders and making them fly off with them. (You don’t stop them. Also didn’t I throw utensils at you?

      (I think the basic description of his morality is sociopath. He doesn’t go out of his way to do evil but he doesn’t care for humans either)

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    • (Yeah I got that. I'm just trying to tell things from Richter's prespective. And he himself is quite the sociopath, too. He's a just extremist, but an extremist nonetheless. I imagine him being softer against kids, though.)

      (Yeah? But from all the green dildos and metallic shit being thrown around I kinda got confused. Look, can you just ignore that one. I DON'T want to redo this scene.)

      (Cack, no. We promised not to control our character's actions. At best, how they are effected by certain things. The green dildo is still a projectile.)

      (Anyways, let's continue.)

      Richter ducks just in time and kicks up some dirt to reposition himself closer to Kay's side. 

      'Now, Chop Suey...' Richter orders his Stand coolly.

      The Stand makes another divine hum even louder than before, stretching out his hand towards Kay. A glow surrounds the young man for a fleeting moment, before it disappears. 

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    • (Sorry, also don’t worry I expected you to just punch them away anyways)

      (Not towards him, just around the place for future sneak attacks)

      (Since you (sorta) understand my ability could you explain yours?)

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    • (Ok...uum, can you have Kay shoot some metalic knives or anything that causes actual damage just to demonstrate?)

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    • (This was a Vegas style hotel so I imagine the robots just attaching the dildos to some slot machine and making that bust through the wall)

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    • (Ok, so basically the simple answer is: Your offense is significantly weaker. Any hostile action you take is less efficent in  any apsect, ranging from speed, precision and overall power output. Your defense and reaction speed stay the same though. Want me to elaborate further?)

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    • (What about automated drones?)

      (Also I’m saving the reason the trigger word you spoke was a trigger word and the trigger itself a mystery to build anticipation for the eventual reveal)

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    • (Basically anything Kay does with ill-intent is far less effective then it should be. Now, that's only because Kay's moral compass is gray. If he was black, Chop Suey would prevent from attacking Richter at all, basically freezing him GER-style. If he was white, then the ability would have no effect on him and the fight would continue without any difference.)

      (Kay's defense isn't affected. The automated drones should function as normal ONLY when they are protecting.)

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    • (I guess he does control the drones so I guess they count)

      I send a drone toward you to open fire with tiny bullets

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    • (Yeah. It's an abstract ability.)

      Chop Suey manages to swat a portion of them away, while the other half barely manages to pierce it's skin, causing minor injuries to Richter.

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    • -What!? They didn’t explode?

      (The bullets were supposed to blow up but your ability made the fuse too weak to activate the gunpowder)

      I send a dildo towards you

      (Dildo is faster to type than Cylinder and since you call them “Green Dildos” I’ll just do the same)

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    • (Ah sorry to cut you short, but I kind of burned out. I'll send another message when I'm ready to continue, is that fine with you?)

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    • (It’s fine)

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    • (I want to see if you can figure out what Kay’s trigger was. Bonus points if you guess why)

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    • (Hi again, Cack. And by trigger you mean one for the explosions or a psychological one?)

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    • (Psychological)

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    • (Hello?)

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    • (Sorry, I had a busy day today. So, the trigger? Well, at first I thought it was 'boy' or rather the way it was said. Like a jab at Kay's pride. Then I thought:'Wait, that's so stupid.')

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    • (Judging from the way Kay reacted, it seems more likely that he has a bad experience with cops and what triggered him was Richter mentioning he was one before. Cop intolerance.)

      P.S. (Or I'm completely wrong and Kay just has PTSD about his mother.)

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    • (Close, but no cigar)

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    • (Let’s just continue the battle)

      (Your turn)

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    • (Ok, but really what was his trigger anyways?)

      Richter leaps out of it's trajectory in the nick of time and hastily closes in on Kay. His Stand manifests behind him, ready to attack.

      "I'm ending this now, young man!"

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    • Kay notices and thinks

      -Oh fuck! I can’t lose to an ungrateful peasant like this! All of mothers co-workers told me how great technology is and that I was gifted! Why! WHY! I can’t let them down, let technology down! If only my mother had payed attention to me maybe this would’ve played out differently! No time to think, I MUST WIN!

      He calls for a drone to surprise attack Richter (it takes a few seconds so you have time to either do your own thing and let me use it on my next turn or you’re free to use it in yours)

      (You were closer to the cigar than I wrote. It does have to do with his mom but it’s not PTSD it’s because she, a computer scientist had so many duties that she ended up neglecting him for most of his childhood and then died. He was practically raised by computers. She died when he was 13 but he didn’t even realize she was missing until he was 15)

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    • (Tf happened to my message?! Goddamn, do I have to redo this again?)

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    • "Agh!"

      Richter grunted. He cursed, stumbling down on the ground, face first, paralyzed for a split second. While Chop Suey rendered most of Kay's attacks non-fatal, even a bit of dull pain could strike an old man like him down, if it hit the right joint. Richter slammed his fist down in frustration, almost growling as he went to get up fast, despite the head-splitting protest of his hurting back.

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    • (What message?)

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    • (Nvm, just continue the fight. Your turn.)

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    • When Kay sees Richter rise up he started panicking and activated all of his drones randomly

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    • Richter supresses a cry of pain as he was being hit from all sides, cuts and holes appearing all over his body, some ignorable, others quite worrysome. 

      He glared at Kay and swiftly Chop Suey slamms it's fists as hard as it could into the ground, sending off a small explosion of flying debris and dust.

      Richter doesn't waste a second. A few rocks fly at seemingly random directions from where Richter was. He growls with determination and charges as fast as he can towards Kay. His body hurt like hell, but Richter's mind didn't register the pain. He was dead-set on coming out of this fight alive, for he had a mission he needed to accomplish before passing away.

      "I won't die now, not when my wife remains unavanged! Take this - Chop Suey!"

      The Stand rears back and shoots forward to punch Kay with enough strength to knock him out cold.  

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    • (May I remind you that you have a Star Platinum-esque stand)

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    • (Yeah, I remember. May I remind you that you have automatic drones at your disposal that could be used for defense, too?

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    • (I meant that you should’ve been able to catch or destroy some of them)

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    • (oh yeah...ok, I'll redo the scene)

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